You're way too young to be broken.
You're way too young to fall apart.
You're way too young to play these games.
But you better start,
But you better start.
This is when it starts,
From the beating of your heart
Till the streetlamps talk to you.
Jumping off of at the edge,
Oversleeping your head,
Everything's turning dark to you.
I went to pick up the parts,
The doctor's hiding the charts,
He won't let me see this side of you.
It's on the tip of my tongue,
You know you're way too young
To have someone lie to you.
~ I'm Not The One,
3OH!3
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An - attempt - at realism.
It's rather realistic if you ask me, the eyes are too large, and she's all out of proportion, but I'm still so proud of this.
Critique Wanted~!
Yes, it's Rue, everybody's favorite twelve year old tribute~
This is her - S P O I L E R - death scene. I cried when she died, it was so sad. :C
I absolutely loved the books, it's the best series I have ever read. The movie was amazing too, and at first I thought the casting sucked, but once I saw it, it all made sense to me. The filming at the start was a little dodgy though.
Sorry about the little blood patch on her jacket, I did it then around half an hour later I realized it kind of ruined the moment. Well, it needs to be known that she's dying, and you probably wouldn't be able to tell if you hadn't seen the movie / read the books.
Also, I know Rue doesn't have dreadlocks, but I could not do her frizzy hair at all, so dreads were the closest thing to that.
The flowers are also not matching the movie's, but that's how I imagined them when I read the books.
I don't know if this is intermediate, I just hope it is.
Timer is right though it seemed longer. x3
Thank you & enjoy!
~ Apple
You're way too young to fall apart.
You're way too young to play these games.
But you better start,
But you better start.
This is when it starts,
From the beating of your heart
Till the streetlamps talk to you.
Jumping off of at the edge,
Oversleeping your head,
Everything's turning dark to you.
I went to pick up the parts,
The doctor's hiding the charts,
He won't let me see this side of you.
It's on the tip of my tongue,
You know you're way too young
To have someone lie to you.
~ I'm Not The One,
3OH!3
.| x x x |.
An - attempt - at realism.
It's rather realistic if you ask me, the eyes are too large, and she's all out of proportion, but I'm still so proud of this.
Critique Wanted~!
Yes, it's Rue, everybody's favorite twelve year old tribute~
This is her - S P O I L E R - death scene. I cried when she died, it was so sad. :C
I absolutely loved the books, it's the best series I have ever read. The movie was amazing too, and at first I thought the casting sucked, but once I saw it, it all made sense to me. The filming at the start was a little dodgy though.
Sorry about the little blood patch on her jacket, I did it then around half an hour later I realized it kind of ruined the moment. Well, it needs to be known that she's dying, and you probably wouldn't be able to tell if you hadn't seen the movie / read the books.
Also, I know Rue doesn't have dreadlocks, but I could not do her frizzy hair at all, so dreads were the closest thing to that.
The flowers are also not matching the movie's, but that's how I imagined them when I read the books.
I don't know if this is intermediate, I just hope it is.
Timer is right though it seemed longer. x3
Thank you & enjoy!
~ Apple
I have no idea why you haven't gotten any comments yet!! :O
